oh zeurel... i still just feel like i'm not your audience. when i do see your work i do see effort. i see alot of visual effort and actual attempts at writing set ups and pay offs, but where i stand, they always seem to fall flat because of being a little too over the top and "wacky" or being too underplayed and forgettable. this one is more on the attempt at building up something and then forgetting how weak the pay off is.
i mean, essentially the first 20 seconds of animation is entirely pointless. you throw in a boob shot for the small minded male audience who craves boobs instead of having a joke-based reason or any relevant reason at all for her being naked in the shot. i don't want to say that's whorish, manipulative, shallow, or any other thing that may insult you, but it kind of was.
the cameo you made to leo and satan was highly ironic to me, especially by the end. for one, who would ever put the effort in to make a chris o'neil cameo in a flash, when his pull is to a very gourmet audience of ADD ridden children which don't generally follow into other animators' work and when the cameo itself is pointless and won't really impress anyone in any real constructive way, and for two, you ripped off the oney flash "learn 2 read", which was as hilariously sad as it was nauseating, whether or not you even realized it.
ok, so these 2 big complaints of mine aside, the animation was solid as usual, the motion is fast, the idea generally simple and focused, and if you haven't seen a joke like this before (which i'm almost certain everyone has and could have seen coming) you might be entertained/disturbed. i'm definitely not the target audience for this flash, i'm well aware, but hopefully my opinion may appeal to you.
PS: next time, if you want to appeal to an audience of people like me, have a coherent reason for the death instead of tossing in discord without a reason, or tie that discord into the story/collection of events.