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    i seriously did not understand the context within the flash.

    please explain why this is so... unable to convey a visual concept

    no. i dont believe i will let you put my pee pee in that guttermouth of yours

    Krutches responds:

    You wish whorse boy

    animation wise, its nothing special but the satire is strong here. i quite like it.

    instant sun from me fellas. i might join up in the next one if economical things improve around heeeeEEEEERRRREEEE

    PS: mia is one sexy ass horse

    arte

    Dosensuppen responds:

    very.

    this made me smile. its so simply happy and manic whilst being reserved and more about the comfort fo this odd creature than his "scary" factor. what a nice flash with a nice premise =)

    props to firth and sandy skorthorpe of waller FM for this beautiful music of a video.

    you have the right idea. you really do. you use an egoraptor style of jump/bounce on character motions, and it works fine. the thing that i saw you were missing was a visual direction.

    you reeeeeally need to know how to show a joke to the audience without telling them through other means. the angles, the edits, the jarring color schemes and close-ups all problems when shoveling a joke's payoff onto the audience,

    try to come up with a way to show the joke happenning in a way that isn't flat and disinteresting.

    other than that, i liked it. good job.

    8/10

    not bad guys. there is definitely something i have to comment on and its visual pacing. things never felt defined enough on screen for the audience to tell what was going on, or what was trying to be conveyed. i suggest slowing down (increasing the amount of blank frames) in between each shot/sequence, allowing for more visual grasp. it allows the audience to take in the actions taking place, and gives them more memory of the situation presented.

    you guys are going to go places if you can work on that =)

    harry you give me hope for the audience. your flashes actually have both visual and written substance that the general public recognize.

    this is like a classic 40's serial, and i absolutely love how much effort you are putting forth to make it as direct and as flawless as you can. every frame just oozes with attention to detail and passion. it makes me jealous honestly, because i will never in my entire life be as committed to animation as you are, and you are simply way too fucking good at it.

    it was well-animated, yeah, but the comedy was a tad too awkwardly timed. you should focus on the timing and the delivery a little better. the characters move very rigid and all, but i can chalk that up to style and ignore it. i still think you could have made this joke work far better had something entirely unexpected happen than a "oh look he's drinking piss" thing. for example, have the character react with "fucking lord my piss tastes like piss!". it is a complete irony and entirely unexpected based on the content presented, and it would have been quite a lot funnier imo.

    but all things considered, you did a good job =)

    Brewster responds:

    Thanks. Yeah the kindd of humor that went into this isn't for everyone, it's pretty childish and stupid. Knowing that, I didn't want to make this minute long animation where the only payoff is this one joke at the end. That's why I kinda sprinkled some small jokes in here and there during the whole thing to make it a little more worthwhile. It seems to have done the job for some, but obviously not everyone's into that and I get that. All I'm saying is, don't think of the last joke as the main punchline, more like another punchline in a small string of punchlines. I don't know. Anyway thanks for the review!

    i'm horsen. i make cartoons, music, art, and mischief on the net. get down you funky clowns.

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