a very static song. its still. it goes nowhere for nearly a minute. its decent for a running loop i guess, but its literally just 1 repeated note for the melody. there's no chord progression, no rhyme or reason for the song as a whole.
i just cant defend this one man.
until you have 5 stars you will never be a person ;D
I love you too.
very dreamtheater esque without the drums or coordination in the keyboard. i do like your powerful guitarwork in this, and i wouldn't mind supplying some prog vocals to it if you'd permit me ^^
dammit this is good stuff
its a very bright piece that doesn't rely on bass (being the interlude in a tragic piece). i really enjoy your writing style, and i definitely enjoyed this piece
sounds like the intro to moulin rouge
not bad honestly
too many unsure bends
the atmosphere around it is nice, and it mixes dance with a nice ancient japanese vibe, much like an okami temple, but... the bends in the lead instrument is offputting... and being the star lead in the song is a sort of poor choice.
the general chord progression is nice, and i really like the atmosphere as i said earlier, but its at its best without percussion. its something that this song didn't need.
overall, nice submission with interesting design choices
Hello! Thank you for the review!
"the bends in the lead instrument is offputting... and being the star lead in the song is a sort of poor choice."
Why is it a poor choice? I had mainly been using it as a guitar sound, using the bends as a way to make it sound more realistic, as if someone were actually changing the note in real time. If someone were actually going to play a guitar, it would have slight pitch bends in it from natural playing, which is what I tried to somewhat mimic.
"but its at its best without percussion. its something that this song didn't need."
I'd have to disagree there. I personally like the percussion, it made the mood be more lively. I will take into consideration the possibility of taking out percussion, and might upload a version without the percussion so people can make comparisons. I may also try making a song without any percussion whatsoever.
Thanks for the review again!
Average Score: 10.0 / 10
and rightly so. this brings tears to my eyes. this is mindblowing...
the lyrical accompaniment adds so much to the already mysteriousness and magnificence this song envelopes.
you are amazing.
Thank You. I'm glad you enjoyed it ^_^
my god, that scream in the intro
it makes the world go round
AAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!
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