I don't even know - not like a like this pasta (though it actually was pretty solid - with good sprite work, many chapters and a decent additional soundtrack. It's the ending that was really, really shitty), but the parody itself is way too shallow, it even feels like "a parody of a parody". It's like a poor man's version of Ukinojoe/Egoraptor videos. There is a potential, it's just feels so undeveloped - graphics are just bad instead of being "So Bad It's Good" or something you're attempting here, and there is almost no jokes, only plain nitpicking for the sake of nitpicking. Try to be more subtle, more original - take things like "Zero Punctuation" and Ukinojoe's videos as an example, and your videos will be much funnier in my opinion (not like you should care about my opinion anyway, lol).
Alphaman
goddamn it daniel you should know that creepypasta's are only meant to scare ppl away from there favorite video games.
Horsenwelles
i sure am scared of that pokemon with the fire one and the leaf one and the aquatic one and they like all fuck or something spooks