slow your shots!!!!! edit your animation at a pace that better suits the audience. the animation is great when you are allowed to see it.
KEEP SCENES NICE AND NOT TOO CLUTTERED. make the mess happen slowly so the audience can tell WHAT IS HAPPENING!!!!
but great effort. 8/10
valentines: BUY OUR HOT SHIT AND FUCK ON IT
harry you british cuntboy you FUCK ZONEGIRL THIS INSTANT OR I WILL NOT GIVE YOU PUDDING IN YOUR DINNER!
AND THEN THEY GOT HIT BY A BUS <3
I PRESENT YOU WITH 4.20 STARS
YOU FUCKING NEWGROUNDS RATING SYSTEM
i live for this kinda fun ass cartoony shit that has ghosties and monstas and jokes and porn jokes and viddie games and adventure god FUCKING HAMMIT YOU WIN.
that was boring. the girl is boring. she has imagination and such but she has no sense of action. there was pretty colors here and there, but the whole thing did nothing emotionally for me.
i know how hard you worked, and i know its a struggle to make cartoons, but damn make them visually funny or interesting or scary or psychologically moving please.
try and say something with your work.
the smooch was really good, but you could do your visual pacing better by adding time to scenes so we can see everything
money as a concept is flawed. it is a "debt system" so why not just everyone take objects they need or want for free?
It's already happening with digital goods. When 3D printing gets better, it will start happening with physical goods too.
I think that as long as there's scarcity though, money systems prevent fights over resources. Lots of better ways to implement them though.
its an old idea but kinda funny. i like the style too!
YOU'RE AN OLD IDEA
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